tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post1069114615477344889..comments2024-03-28T12:21:40.925-04:00Comments on The Girdle of Melian: First Ever Sharing of a Snip from the New StoryDeniz Bevanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-4566730935003433282012-09-16T18:39:53.000-04:002012-09-16T18:39:53.000-04:00Thanks, nutschell!Thanks, nutschell!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-76426666750533445892012-09-14T13:21:33.253-04:002012-09-14T13:21:33.253-04:00INtriguing, for sure! Totally love that venn diagr...INtriguing, for sure! Totally love that venn diagram.;)<br /><br />Nutschell<br />www.thewritingnut.comnutschellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10967710710805174781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-38532768788859190002012-09-11T10:26:43.759-04:002012-09-11T10:26:43.759-04:00Thanks so much Medeia, Hilary and Eagle! I'm a...Thanks so much Medeia, Hilary and Eagle! I'm all the more excited to keep typing up the draft now!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-14214418209535127842012-09-07T20:14:16.438-04:002012-09-07T20:14:16.438-04:00Great snippet! I love that the character's an ...Great snippet! I love that the character's an archaeologist; and the paper is definitely intriguing.Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-48447300354425743912012-09-07T05:38:02.863-04:002012-09-07T05:38:02.863-04:00Hi Deniz .. certainly a mix of emotions going on h...Hi Deniz .. certainly a mix of emotions going on here - sounds a fascinating concept ... I certainly want to know where the wind is coming from and its context ... and that vellum sheet ... and questionable mark ... <br /><br />Lovely atmosphere ... cheers HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-59438880421297990262012-09-06T21:30:05.085-04:002012-09-06T21:30:05.085-04:00Interesting. You transported me elsewhere. This so...Interesting. You transported me elsewhere. This sounds mysterious, as well as historical and archaeological. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-14171085799136327072012-09-06T21:07:17.750-04:002012-09-06T21:07:17.750-04:00Thanks Jeff!Thanks Jeff!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-25911772095848771942012-09-06T20:59:19.077-04:002012-09-06T20:59:19.077-04:00Nice. Intriguing glimpse and tease. Nice. Intriguing glimpse and tease. Jeff Hargetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14198367021884647821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-51089773636339315872012-09-06T20:43:21.826-04:002012-09-06T20:43:21.826-04:00Yay, thanks everyone! It's always so nerve rac...Yay, thanks everyone! It's always so nerve racking to share.Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-76506852140469075892012-09-06T20:13:44.844-04:002012-09-06T20:13:44.844-04:00Thanks for sharing your opening. Love that last l...Thanks for sharing your opening. Love that last line--oh snap!<br /><br />Great Neil Gaiman picture. Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-58757688303408981752012-09-06T20:13:26.273-04:002012-09-06T20:13:26.273-04:00This is a good tease. Caves, curses, and Druids--...This is a good tease. Caves, curses, and Druids--nothing wrong with those story elements.<br /><br /><br />Lee<br /><a href="http://afarawayview.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow"> A Faraway View</a><br />Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-87880571726734941642012-09-05T15:44:03.931-04:002012-09-05T15:44:03.931-04:00What a fun and intriguing excerpt! Good job on the...What a fun and intriguing excerpt! Good job on the setting too. Congrats on a compelling beginning. :)Carol Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092209912983783974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-57586439703556119642012-09-05T13:47:10.391-04:002012-09-05T13:47:10.391-04:00Excellent writing. Very descriptive. I could "...Excellent writing. Very descriptive. I could "see" what was going on--like watching a movie. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-54707210036002897242012-09-05T12:34:08.062-04:002012-09-05T12:34:08.062-04:00Love the snip. Can't wait to see more.Love the snip. Can't wait to see more.S.P. Bowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746614009206426805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-79237974696931288082012-09-05T11:02:29.556-04:002012-09-05T11:02:29.556-04:00"The curse of the octopus." = awesome op..."The curse of the octopus." = awesome opener.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-13298441551540493812012-09-05T08:47:06.359-04:002012-09-05T08:47:06.359-04:00Deniz,
I already love that story :).
Do you hav...Deniz,<br /><br />I already love that story :). <br /><br />Do you have more to share . I would love to read more!Sarah Meralhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02830606594477853954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-69781289717499669722012-09-05T08:30:00.644-04:002012-09-05T08:30:00.644-04:00And an intriguing snip it is! Ooooh, Deniz, I'...And an intriguing snip it is! Ooooh, Deniz, I'm going to like this one. I just know it. Zan Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13403563510118660546noreply@blogger.com