tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post8218644343005749522..comments2024-03-28T12:21:40.925-04:00Comments on The Girdle of Melian: Final Installment of Rule of Three Blogfest Story, and a WhisperDeniz Bevanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-8422440823052186782011-11-02T10:23:38.387-04:002011-11-02T10:23:38.387-04:00Aww, thank you Michael! I'm so glad you see it...Aww, thank you Michael! I'm so glad you see it that way. [[hugs]]Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-20340160666321485362011-10-31T10:50:26.400-04:002011-10-31T10:50:26.400-04:00Sweet, tender, with underlines of deep passion. Ni...Sweet, tender, with underlines of deep passion. Nicely done, Deniz. <br /><br />You have created old world charm that has been buried for so long in literature.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-24555311603911973662011-10-30T17:58:58.278-04:002011-10-30T17:58:58.278-04:00Thank you Misha - I hope they will too, if I ever ...Thank you Misha - I hope they will too, if I ever finish the draft of the novel.<br />Thanks alberta, Eagle, Donna, and J.C. - I couldn't have let them go without a sweet ending [g]Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-81798814924779313782011-10-29T18:19:22.865-04:002011-10-29T18:19:22.865-04:00And...The End! What a journey it has been! And now...And...The End! What a journey it has been! And now begins the hardest part: the judging!J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-55807042916809834342011-10-29T03:11:22.557-04:002011-10-29T03:11:22.557-04:00That was sweet. I like how it all wrapped up, and...That was sweet. I like how it all wrapped up, and the two will be together.<br /><br />....dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-26630915119615733532011-10-28T19:08:00.331-04:002011-10-28T19:08:00.331-04:00I love the ending! :)
I always had longer first d...I love the ending! :)<br /><br />I always had longer first drafts for my Renaissance entries, too--one ended up at 1200 words. Needless to say I had to cut quite a bit. :PGolden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-28333796553597171172011-10-28T14:44:16.944-04:002011-10-28T14:44:16.944-04:00a happy ending - I love your style here with roman...a happy ending - I love your style here with romance - looking forward to reading more - thanks for popping in at sefutyalberta rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02132420168908365099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-80032059302056516732011-10-28T14:42:24.418-04:002011-10-28T14:42:24.418-04:00Aw sweet! I hope they live happily ever after. :-)...Aw sweet! I hope they live happily ever after. :-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-54664727749734469542011-10-28T13:27:49.465-04:002011-10-28T13:27:49.465-04:00Thanks reka! Good luck to you too with NaNo.Thanks reka! Good luck to you too with NaNo.Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-35167684708988679342011-10-28T06:22:37.354-04:002011-10-28T06:22:37.354-04:00I loved the ending...well written and I am attempt...I loved the ending...well written and I am attempting Nano again this year after two false starts. Good luck for everything..reka sanghttp://www.achronicleofdreams.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-82595985996127902902011-10-27T21:18:47.983-04:002011-10-27T21:18:47.983-04:00Aww, thanks Nadja. I hope I can finish the draft d...Aww, thanks Nadja. I hope I can finish the draft during NaNo!<br /><br />Thanks Joshua, Jenna, Wendy, David, Medeia and treelight! I'm so glad you liked it. It's going to be hard getting away from this blogfest and back to 'serious' novel drafting :-)Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-19141381850251550022011-10-27T20:52:42.459-04:002011-10-27T20:52:42.459-04:00Ah, I love a happy ending with a married couple :)...Ah, I love a happy ending with a married couple :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-29167009790641817882011-10-27T20:31:55.232-04:002011-10-27T20:31:55.232-04:00Great piece with a wonderful ending.
Good luck wi...Great piece with a wonderful ending.<br /><br />Good luck with NaNo. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-75912629419005086282011-10-27T14:06:37.235-04:002011-10-27T14:06:37.235-04:00That was a sweet ending! Sealed with a kiss. What ...That was a sweet ending! Sealed with a kiss. What a great way to wrap it all up. Thanks for sharing your work! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-75539994399890627222011-10-26T18:03:27.054-04:002011-10-26T18:03:27.054-04:00Lovely. Your work is wonderful. The characters a...Lovely. Your work is wonderful. The characters are so easy to fall in love with. Their plights are involving. Thank you for sharing; Looking forward to more :)Wendy Janehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13900244263712010038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-87105572656434490222011-10-26T14:56:32.007-04:002011-10-26T14:56:32.007-04:00I agree -I'll miss this too! Thanks for sharin...I agree -I'll miss this too! Thanks for sharing and good luck on NaNo!JennaQuentinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06794730025120308897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-52054224999548956342011-10-26T14:29:16.881-04:002011-10-26T14:29:16.881-04:00Yeah for happy endings!!Yeah for happy endings!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-43540914556724650332011-10-26T10:19:46.507-04:002011-10-26T10:19:46.507-04:00I'm wrapped up in your story and characters, D...I'm wrapped up in your story and characters, Deniz - and I just love happy endings. I kept hoping you'd have them admit it in the end. I wouldn't mind reading their 'whole' story...just saying. :)Nadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-18669738710530211222011-10-26T09:37:46.113-04:002011-10-26T09:37:46.113-04:00Thanks Sara and Laurel!Thanks Sara and Laurel!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-66233795866777728452011-10-26T08:37:33.188-04:002011-10-26T08:37:33.188-04:00Nice tension here, Deniz! And good luck with NaNo!...Nice tension here, Deniz! And good luck with NaNo!Laurel Garverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03657218435228802535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-12549225017495706672011-10-26T08:14:12.810-04:002011-10-26T08:14:12.810-04:00I'm not doing NaNo so can only live vicariousl...I'm not doing NaNo so can only live vicariously through others so go ahead and talk about it. And keep the snips coming.S.P. Bowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746614009206426805noreply@blogger.com