tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post3698857138701036474..comments2024-03-28T12:21:40.925-04:00Comments on The Girdle of Melian: Ayten's Story Outtake for Campaign Challenge ThreeDeniz Bevanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-21042956283416230602011-10-28T12:22:58.173-04:002011-10-28T12:22:58.173-04:00Squee! Thanks Mel!Squee! Thanks Mel!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-6736820436332168972011-10-28T11:09:56.379-04:002011-10-28T11:09:56.379-04:00I'm supposed to tell you that you've moved...I'm supposed to tell you that you've moved on to the next round of judging. Congrats!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-44049605390478810892011-10-25T21:12:57.305-04:002011-10-25T21:12:57.305-04:00Thank you Sheri, mood, Jen, David, KT and Kurt! Yo...Thank you Sheri, mood, Jen, David, KT and Kurt! You guys are really getting me excited to work on this story during NaNo :-)Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-90647771513404212792011-10-25T20:00:33.637-04:002011-10-25T20:00:33.637-04:00Fantastic! I actually came over to read your lates...Fantastic! I actually came over to read your latest Rule of 3, but stopped by this one first. Nice use of the words!Kurt Hartwighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12857036723957923656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-44218753379857618192011-10-25T10:59:51.471-04:002011-10-25T10:59:51.471-04:00I love that your WIP fit so perfectly into this ch...I love that your WIP fit so perfectly into this challenge. Well done on slipping in the words too!K.T. Hannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477211734721721621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-29359121185263477202011-10-24T16:20:49.671-04:002011-10-24T16:20:49.671-04:00If this is part of your WiP, then I want a copy of...If this is part of your WiP, then I want a copy of this book. Let me know when it's coming out.<br /><br />I've enjoyed reading your entries! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-3016856747658014142011-10-24T08:59:10.688-04:002011-10-24T08:59:10.688-04:00The small bits of your WIP you've shared durin...The small bits of your WIP you've shared during the Campaign have been intriguing. I really want to know more! <br />Mine is #25.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12314617048592538691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-2150317667306597952011-10-24T07:07:33.620-04:002011-10-24T07:07:33.620-04:00The start of a love triangle?
Good job, liked it...The start of a love triangle? <br /><br />Good job, liked it.<br /><br />mood<br />(now following)<br /><a href="http://moodywriting.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Moody Writing</a><br /><a href="http://twitter.com/mooderino" rel="nofollow">@mooderino</a><br />no. 79mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-42833007889547504312011-10-23T21:17:30.223-04:002011-10-23T21:17:30.223-04:00Very nicely done, incorporating your WIP! Sounds ...Very nicely done, incorporating your WIP! Sounds like my kind of story! ; )Sheri L. Swift, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08585820531737824211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-70751110320256906412011-10-23T16:42:53.179-04:002011-10-23T16:42:53.179-04:00Thanks Tony!
Aww, thanks Glynis! DH and I are hop...Thanks Tony!<br /><br />Aww, thanks Glynis! DH and I are hoping to return to the UK in the spring.<br /><br />Thank you Nadja and Misha! It's not necessarily by choice - once I'm in these characters' heads, I can't switch to anyone else.<br /><br />Thanks Katie, Bridget, treelight and Jess. If the other woman makes it into the novel, I'll let you know who she is. Otherwise... [evil grin]Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-45116405843404742952011-10-23T16:30:47.015-04:002011-10-23T16:30:47.015-04:00Yes, very surprising ending! Loved it! I want to r...Yes, very surprising ending! Loved it! I want to read more!!<br /><br />I'm entry #5Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-59019285023268816102011-10-23T14:22:20.184-04:002011-10-23T14:22:20.184-04:00Quite an interesting take on the Challenge, compar...Quite an interesting take on the Challenge, compared to what I have read so far. I liked it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-22811475778621850942011-10-23T14:17:42.664-04:002011-10-23T14:17:42.664-04:00Is the other woman a synbatic? Mine is #56Is the other woman a synbatic? Mine is #56bridgethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01553619856059414447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-90461072894174271552011-10-23T12:46:26.260-04:002011-10-23T12:46:26.260-04:00Nicely done! Who is this other woman?! Great job. ...Nicely done! Who is this other woman?! Great job. :)Katie Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17554091817717890150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-85671811953827239782011-10-22T15:27:32.964-04:002011-10-22T15:27:32.964-04:00I love that you use the same characters for the Ch...I love that you use the same characters for the Challenge and Rule of Three. :-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-71903645329964120732011-10-22T11:22:15.968-04:002011-10-22T11:22:15.968-04:00I'm enjoying that you are staying with the cha...I'm enjoying that you are staying with the characters from your current WIP; that's such a great idea, and I'm sure it encourages you to delve more deeply into the characters' minds, too. Your style is lovely, and I always enjoy your settings and descriptions. <br /><br />I skipped this challenge, with Rule of Three, ROW80, and NaNo prep - I'm taxed! <br /><br />Have a great weekend, Deniz!Nadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-32087573829347981582011-10-22T04:20:47.626-04:002011-10-22T04:20:47.626-04:00PS: I thought of you when I walked around Colchest...PS: I thought of you when I walked around Colchester Castle grounds last week. Straight away I saw your face and remembered you had visited.Glynis Peters https://www.blogger.com/profile/01175378917872403609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-63257927928745733712011-10-22T04:18:55.115-04:002011-10-22T04:18:55.115-04:00Great piece to use for the challenge, Deniz. You u...Great piece to use for the challenge, Deniz. You used the guidelines well.Glynis Peters https://www.blogger.com/profile/01175378917872403609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-39058564565151079152011-10-21T20:55:31.346-04:002011-10-21T20:55:31.346-04:00oh yeah i saw someone else do the challenge earlie...oh yeah i saw someone else do the challenge earlier today, its quite interestingIgneel21https://www.blogger.com/profile/08933556198189963295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-30058771634064933562011-10-21T16:26:10.222-04:002011-10-21T16:26:10.222-04:00Aww, thank you Eagle! So inspiring, as I start dra...Aww, thank you Eagle! So inspiring, as I start drafting my way into Ayten's story.Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-76693732772951721172011-10-21T16:14:37.116-04:002011-10-21T16:14:37.116-04:00That's a surprising ending! Great writing--I w...That's a surprising ending! Great writing--I wish there was more. :)Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-6399636069134204042011-10-21T11:02:22.207-04:002011-10-21T11:02:22.207-04:00Thanks Carole, Zan Marie, and Linda! I never would...Thanks Carole, Zan Marie, and Linda! I never would have been able to do this challenge if Rach hadn't thrown the beach in there - it came at just the right place, when I was already thinking about this timeline in my story.Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-43343887020106081342011-10-21T10:47:25.564-04:002011-10-21T10:47:25.564-04:00Oh, nice! You did it all, and very well! :)Oh, nice! You did it all, and very well! :)Linda G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04576828490765434497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-38732158008042940282011-10-21T10:32:58.689-04:002011-10-21T10:32:58.689-04:00Good job! I'm not even trying this challenge. ...Good job! I'm not even trying this challenge. Too much else is demanding I write NOW! ; )Zan Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00166450116524323462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-50469113854267634292011-10-21T09:36:22.886-04:002011-10-21T09:36:22.886-04:00Sounds like a great challenge!Sounds like a great challenge!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957545161716269528noreply@blogger.com