tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post5691775770280589018..comments2024-03-28T12:21:40.925-04:00Comments on The Girdle of Melian: Third POV in Rule of Three and Some Book and Contest NewsDeniz Bevanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-77428940615234449082011-11-02T10:24:07.323-04:002011-11-02T10:24:07.323-04:00Oh good - I always wonder if I'm getting male ...Oh good - I always wonder if I'm getting male POV right.Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-18097279456615297922011-10-31T10:42:01.511-04:002011-10-31T10:42:01.511-04:00I really like the strength in both these character...I really like the strength in both these characters. Plus you can really feel his frustration and her fire.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-55020456157153021782011-10-23T14:42:54.640-04:002011-10-23T14:42:54.640-04:00Thanks J.C. and Stuart!
And thank you reka, Wendy ...Thanks J.C. and Stuart!<br />And thank you reka, Wendy and treelight! Good question about the dress. I'm assuming late-19th century Greek (which is technically 400 years after Ayten's time), as I got the image off the <a href="http://www.orientalistgallery.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Orientalist Gallery</a>.Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-85906075022813485542011-10-23T14:26:46.482-04:002011-10-23T14:26:46.482-04:00Oh, I like it when stories take such a turn! :)))
...Oh, I like it when stories take such a turn! :)))<br />And that's a great picture, too. What kind of dress is that?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-14909551903850531602011-10-22T23:27:10.792-04:002011-10-22T23:27:10.792-04:00Congrats on your goals. And thanks for sharing yo...Congrats on your goals. And thanks for sharing your work once again. I easily get caught up in it. Keep up the good work!Wendy Janehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13900244263712010038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-87726069236608943232011-10-22T14:08:12.970-04:002011-10-22T14:08:12.970-04:00This is a exciting instalment gearing us for the g...This is a exciting instalment gearing us for the grand finale...and I like the strong Ayeten.reka sanghttp://www.achronicleofdreams.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-32212957218917162442011-10-21T17:07:36.099-04:002011-10-21T17:07:36.099-04:00I’ve been by to read your entry. All I can say is ...I’ve been by to read your entry. All I can say is judging will be tough! Bring on Week 4!<br /><br />J.C.J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-5523528410306748132011-10-21T11:58:35.666-04:002011-10-21T11:58:35.666-04:00Thank you Anne, Sara, Crystal and Gene!
Thanks Na...Thank you Anne, Sara, Crystal and Gene!<br /><br />Thanks Nadja! I'm looking forward to reading everyone else's.<br /><br />Thanks Eagle, Claudia, Joshua and li!<br /><br />Ooh, thanks Misha [g] He's the hero of the next book, so I'm really glad you like him.<br /><br />Thank you David!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-74946496962172694122011-10-20T14:49:50.215-04:002011-10-20T14:49:50.215-04:00You painted an excellent scene. Had no confusion o...You painted an excellent scene. Had no confusion of where I way and could imagine being there. The picture adds a nice touch, too. :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-20951802418212729012011-10-20T08:14:57.605-04:002011-10-20T08:14:57.605-04:00Aw I must say I love Devran. He's my favorite....Aw I must say I love Devran. He's my favorite. :-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-43888585334303396362011-10-19T19:03:53.343-04:002011-10-19T19:03:53.343-04:00Making my rounds of the 3rd week entries :-) "...Making my rounds of the 3rd week entries :-) "Rabble of Renaissance", I like that.Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-12432450025090102002011-10-19T18:43:28.693-04:002011-10-19T18:43:28.693-04:00What a way to cliffhang! I swear this next week is...What a way to cliffhang! I swear this next week is going to take forever.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-49462136480049414322011-10-19T18:27:52.398-04:002011-10-19T18:27:52.398-04:00Great excerpt! Keep it coming :)Great excerpt! Keep it coming :)Claudia Lefevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02591547986192202834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-64166192136962007422011-10-19T17:48:12.125-04:002011-10-19T17:48:12.125-04:00I can't wait to find out what happens in the f...I can't wait to find out what happens in the final installment! Loved the tension in this piece.<br /><br />And thanks for posting the picture. :)Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-64137606382418285162011-10-19T10:48:31.729-04:002011-10-19T10:48:31.729-04:00I love that she didn't look up...that her eyes...I love that she didn't look up...that her eyes, when he saw them, were 'blue-chips of ice'...that she sidesteps him...<br />Ambiguity...that creator and sustainer of tension. Just great!Nadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-57217210367147113582011-10-19T10:40:02.494-04:002011-10-19T10:40:02.494-04:00Great job on your goals, Deniz. I know getting int...Great job on your goals, Deniz. I know getting into a new project will be exciting, free flow, love it :)<br /><br />Love the excerpt, well done.<br /><br />Have a great second half of the week!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-80795011899434178492011-10-19T10:33:40.153-04:002011-10-19T10:33:40.153-04:00Oh "smote" is a great word! Have a good ...Oh "smote" is a great word! Have a good rest of the week!CrystalCiphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07233823050629186839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-48238795730078175792011-10-19T10:18:25.050-04:002011-10-19T10:18:25.050-04:00Thanks for the excerpt!Thanks for the excerpt!S.P. Bowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746614009206426805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-15080109895642775442011-10-19T08:13:49.604-04:002011-10-19T08:13:49.604-04:00What a great excerpt. I love the word "smote...What a great excerpt. I love the word "smote". I'll have to remember it.Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.com