tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post6779290664621150114..comments2024-03-28T12:21:40.925-04:00Comments on The Girdle of Melian: Ayten and Devran in the First Campaigner Challenge of Rach's Fourth Writers' CampaignDeniz Bevanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comBlogger46125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-22665307327824451532012-02-29T08:59:27.757-05:002012-02-29T08:59:27.757-05:00Thank you, Tina!Thank you, Tina!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-6930025452313336712012-02-29T08:10:05.043-05:002012-02-29T08:10:05.043-05:00Intriguing, especially the part with the bones in ...Intriguing, especially the part with the bones in the garden. :) Good Luck in the ChallengeTina DC Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10508524105205614426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-92104759972316157482012-02-28T19:09:10.367-05:002012-02-28T19:09:10.367-05:00Thanks Arlee, J. C., C. M. and Colleen! I'm st...Thanks Arlee, J. C., C. M. and Colleen! I'm still making the rounds...Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-74277146480096358062012-02-24T10:25:16.655-05:002012-02-24T10:25:16.655-05:00Great dialogue and romantic tension, as usual...I ...Great dialogue and romantic tension, as usual...I love these characters already.Colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03971798802079783209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-39680665253410260952012-02-24T08:21:26.796-05:002012-02-24T08:21:26.796-05:00I liked the playful dialogue too! Well done!I liked the playful dialogue too! Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09678216576112327332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-78971952342644658032012-02-24T05:44:52.649-05:002012-02-24T05:44:52.649-05:00Nice confrontation scene. Was that a parting threa...Nice confrontation scene. Was that a parting threat?J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-17745253981645756412012-02-24T00:20:31.985-05:002012-02-24T00:20:31.985-05:00Nice job meeting the challenge. Orange ink eh?
L...Nice job meeting the challenge. Orange ink eh?<br /><br /><br />Lee (#126 on the Campaign Challenge List)<br />An A to Z Co-Host <br /><a href="http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tossing It Out</a><br />Twitter: @AprilA2Z <br />#atozchallengeArlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-19813865483849906902012-02-23T19:38:31.995-05:002012-02-23T19:38:31.995-05:00Thanks very much all! Off to read and enjoy yours,...Thanks very much all! Off to read and enjoy yours, now!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-57325855088807968242012-02-23T16:00:15.145-05:002012-02-23T16:00:15.145-05:00Very poetic, rich with lovely dialogue. Nicely do...Very poetic, rich with lovely dialogue. Nicely done. I'm entry #96. Oh, and I saw your query up on the QQQE. That was very well done, too. Good for you!Nancy Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05735642863696266005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-28916706449760721332012-02-23T10:22:55.756-05:002012-02-23T10:22:55.756-05:00Different. I like it. = )
Melissa Maygrove
#149 o...Different. I like it. = )<br /><br />Melissa Maygrove<br />#149 on the Campaign Challenge listMelissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-65501481040146906632012-02-23T07:19:11.410-05:002012-02-23T07:19:11.410-05:00Great job on the challenge. I was hooked and wante...Great job on the challenge. I was hooked and wanted to read more. <br /><br />I love Neil Gaiman, he is one of the most amazing writers.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04443736284850057306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-27741150988581456752012-02-22T20:29:38.306-05:002012-02-22T20:29:38.306-05:00Great dialogue and intriguing story line.Great dialogue and intriguing story line.Miranda Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17880449368013410349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-83624884281451894062012-02-22T19:50:33.320-05:002012-02-22T19:50:33.320-05:00Very nice. Sets up a lot of questions for a wider ...Very nice. Sets up a lot of questions for a wider story too. Well done!Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-60821850805238613352012-02-22T17:56:46.974-05:002012-02-22T17:56:46.974-05:00So nice to meet a fellow historical fan! Loved the...So nice to meet a fellow historical fan! Loved the line about the garden full of bones too. Very nice! :-)Christy Farmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03891965607401791893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-33626846327254671812012-02-22T16:46:13.990-05:002012-02-22T16:46:13.990-05:00Good job.Good job.Traci Kenworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07336373871521363649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-86160760272763942082012-02-22T16:05:36.931-05:002012-02-22T16:05:36.931-05:00Very interesting. I'm curious to know more. Gr...Very interesting. I'm curious to know more. Great job!Kerri Cuevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13305892536084882077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-27403153165285154232012-02-22T10:54:28.036-05:002012-02-22T10:54:28.036-05:00Oh, you've got such a great story going on her...Oh, you've got such a great story going on here! So much history and drama!<br /><br />I'm #109 if you want to stop by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12106399041059595196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-86521174793145006572012-02-21T21:17:14.337-05:002012-02-21T21:17:14.337-05:00Thanks so much everyone! All your kind words are m...Thanks so much everyone! All your kind words are making me blush :-)Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-91961886216507150972012-02-21T20:01:03.230-05:002012-02-21T20:01:03.230-05:00Great dialogue. I especially love the line about t...Great dialogue. I especially love the line about the garden full of bones. :)Avery Marshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15615057600393412922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-40142398740232702512012-02-21T19:51:11.463-05:002012-02-21T19:51:11.463-05:00Intriguing! Nice job. Oh, and I adore Neil Gaiman....Intriguing! Nice job. Oh, and I adore Neil Gaiman.alexiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07122487552931794871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-55417906823155139082012-02-21T17:47:11.040-05:002012-02-21T17:47:11.040-05:00There are some really great lines here and wonderf...There are some really great lines here and wonderful dialogue.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218651886143284455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-9875904167807923932012-02-21T17:20:10.450-05:002012-02-21T17:20:10.450-05:00I loooove Stardust! It's one of my favorite bo...I loooove Stardust! It's one of my favorite books and I think I've watched the movie 5x. :)nutschellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10967710710805174781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-58736329752990205872012-02-21T17:13:37.528-05:002012-02-21T17:13:37.528-05:00Ooo, awesome entry for the first challenge. I love...Ooo, awesome entry for the first challenge. I love the lines "I don't tell falsehoods or embellish my words. That would be the task of a poet."Cherie Reichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16663147386014122939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-40637048836938992982012-02-21T17:06:10.179-05:002012-02-21T17:06:10.179-05:00I liked the playful dialogue :)
#83I liked the playful dialogue :)<br />#83Charmaine Clancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18059559142070140041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3029491889310063596.post-38864282603180015912012-02-21T15:58:17.824-05:002012-02-21T15:58:17.824-05:00Like everyone else said, the garden of bones part ...Like everyone else said, the garden of bones part is intriguing. I can't resist a mysterious character.Sherri Lackeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12574448009541412249noreply@blogger.com