Out of the Water Chapter Critique at Clarissa's! and More NaNo

Day 3!




Kristi did a fun NaNo list over on the forum, and I've created one for myself:

Spanish classes skipped: 1
Lattes: 1
Cups of coffee: upwards of 10 (but that mostly because there's a symposium on at work and I get free coffee)
Dinners made by me: 0
Pauses on the stairwell in the office to scribble ideas: at least 2 per day
Replies given to friends and colleagues in character: 2
Dreams about writing while walking down the street: 1
Silent panic attacks: 1
Said panic attack calmed by coffee refill: 1
Scenes written that are required by the wip: 0
Scenes written that take the wip in new directions: 4
I could go on, but I'm too busy writing.

Clarissa Draper has done a brilliant Chapter Critique (in her ongoing series) of a scene from Out of the Water! Thank you Clarissa. Check it out, here.

Don't forget to enter my Jean Little giveaway - and vote in Disgruntled Bear's Query Contest!

Also, How To Write Badly Well features Old Istanbul...

And finally... drum roll... Talli Roland's The Hating Game is coming soon! And it's definitely worth the wait. Details to come, she added, teasingly...

Comments

Talli Roland said…
Just read your extract over at Clarissa's! Loved it!

I do hope you're enjoying 'The Hating Game'...

Happy Wednesday!
Clarissa Draper said…
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. I would love to read it when your book is done! Happy coffee drinking.

CD
Deniz Bevan said…
Thanks Talli - er, I finished The Hating Game last night! I had to stay up late cos I couldn't stop reading :-)

Thanks Clarissa! Yes, I'm definitely a fan of coffee - shucks, as long as it helps me write...
Deniz Bevan said…
Thanks Talli - er, I finished The Hating Game last night! I had to stay up late cos I couldn't stop reading :-)

Thanks Clarissa! Yes, I'm definitely a fan of coffee - shucks, as long as it helps me write...
Mary Mary said…
I've read the critique and I'll tell you, I did enjoy the flow of the story. I just also wanted to say, welcome to The Random Book Review. It's good to have you along!

♥Mary Mary
Deniz Bevan said…
Thanks Mary! It's exciting, as I'm pushing to finish the first draft at the end of NaNo.

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