Always Versus Never
ack in March, Lydia Kang had a neat post about writing habits; the Always/Never list.
My list goes like this:
In my writing, I Always:
- use pen and paper for the first draft
- have characters glance at each other
- repeat "and then" all over the place
- use the word "wondered"
- sprinkle meaningless modifiers (small, big, large, tiny, etc.) willy nilly
I Never:
- know the names of secondary characters until the third draft or so
- keep all the scenes I write (a lot end up as gangplanks or backstory, saved in draft folders)
- add dialogue tags in the first draft (the margin is always filled with notes like "but what are they doing??")
- write a story set in modern times
use contractions. Everyone's so formal all the time! I have to remind myself to be more casual in dialogue.
What sorts of habits do you have?
ROW80 going well! Still working on typing and editing the murder mystery short story. Hope everyone else is meeting their goals!
My list goes like this:
In my writing, I Always:
- use pen and paper for the first draft
- have characters glance at each other
- repeat "and then" all over the place
- use the word "wondered"
- sprinkle meaningless modifiers (small, big, large, tiny, etc.) willy nilly
I Never:
- know the names of secondary characters until the third draft or so
- keep all the scenes I write (a lot end up as gangplanks or backstory, saved in draft folders)
- add dialogue tags in the first draft (the margin is always filled with notes like "but what are they doing??")
- write a story set in modern times
use contractions. Everyone's so formal all the time! I have to remind myself to be more casual in dialogue.
What sorts of habits do you have?
ROW80 going well! Still working on typing and editing the murder mystery short story. Hope everyone else is meeting their goals!
Comments
Julius
I am lucky to have broken many of my bad habit. I used to use tons of adverbs, used hundreds of tags, and use REALLY a lot.
I still use really a lot, but it's because of teenage dialogue. They LOVE really. Really. LOL.
I am sure I do other no-nos but I keep a watchful eye. My first novel was so OVER written at 125,000 plus words for an m/g fantasy novel, it took me almost two years to edit. Now a shiny 62000 thousand words it still needs one more edit.
My second novel I went to the opposite extreme and wrote a slim Y/A contemporary economizing my words and descriptions. Well, now I've been told it needs beefing up by 10000 words. Do we ever win?
I'm guilty of most of these too.
I am the queen of not using contractions! See what I mean? I'm reading my 2nd manuscript, which has ZERO contractions. Half of my editing time is combining words.
You know what else my characters do, Sara? They stare. And peer. And glance and look and watch and glare. Darn it!!
I hear you on the word count, Michael. At 131,000 or so, mine's way too long for a romance. Still trying to cut words out...
I like your personification, Theresa! It's hard to force myself to put in contractions. I got so brainwashed in high school on never using them...
Good point, E.R.! Flexibility is key.
I need some of your contractions, Zan Marie!
Keep up the good work. And thank you for your visit and comment on my blog. Much appreciated!
I love that you write your first drafts with pen and paper. I have to use a mix of the two, as I type faster than I can write by hand, but often crave the visceral feel of a pen gripped within my hand and scratching over the paper.
I never use a pen for writing. (Except to mark editing)
I do have my characters glance at each other.
It's funny my secondary characters usually have their names from the start. My main characters often refuse to tell me their 'true' name until after the first draft.
I never use a pen for any draft anymore. It's all on my laptop these days.
Also, I never, ever give up! ;-)
Good luck with your goals the rest of the week!
Nadja's Always/Never List ~
I always:
Write with a pencil and paper
Have margins full of notes/re-writes
Read over what I've just written (hence the margin scribbles)
Use those darned meaningless modifiers....and too many of them
Have characters wondering/staring/peering/glancing/observing/studying/.....until I want to scream - or laugh
I Never:
Write on the computer
Use contractions until I'm in edits and realize that I have the most properly speaking characters in the universe
Fail to find a sentence that sends me into fits of giggles....like this one..."...would be the propellent for his explosion in the cage." - I read it and then realize that if he 'explodes' - he will be dead - and it will be quite messy. Ha! After wiping the tears of laughter from my eyes..I rewrite...,"....would be the propellent for his explosive performance in the cage." - and all's right in the world again.
Too funny.
~ Nadja
I remember I used "then" too much in my memoir. And there were other repetitions, too! That's why we keep revising, and revising, and revising, hoping in the end ....
Thanks for stopping by and wishing my daughter well. She had a VERY good day yesterday but then a bad night last night (though she rarely wakes me up, thank goodness). So she'll take a nap today. I tell her she has that luxury, unlike many who work day jobs. So much in life is a trade-off.
Hope your revisions are going well on your historical novel, and that you'll soon find an agent for your MG fantasy.
Ann Best, Author of In the Mirror, A Memoir of Shattered Secrets
~ Yaya
I probably spend too much time editing as I write, hoping I won't have to do hundreds of revisions.
You do have an interesting way of writing.
Also...writing the first draft in pen and paper would kill me. How do you do it?
That's interesting, Al - wonder why your main characters get named later? I guess there are more layers to them, and naming is harder.
Lucky you, Liz - I'd probably finish books faster if I could draft on the computer.
You're right, Cate - we should never give up! No matter how many drafts it takes :-)
Thank you, Nadka - loved your list! I'd forgotten about all the scribbling I do in the margins.
That's a really funny sentence! I find a few when I'm typing up scenes, too.
Glad to hear it was a good day, Ann! You're right - I've got piles of "and then"s all over the MS...
I like lists of all kinds, Yaya. Love your contractions :-)
That's interesting, Talli. I sort of do the same. Especially at the start; I only really know hair and eye colour and not much else.
Some days I think I'd like to try your way, Joy - editing as I go. It might save lots of time later?
I can't seem to do it any other way, Michael. With pen and paper I'm ready to draft anywhere, whenever inspiration hits!
I always read out loud to edit and never write while drunk. ;-)