A Story Snip for Lingering Winter
inter lingers on! The prompt for the February excercise on the writers' forum was to reveal setting through character. Here're the longer guidelines: "1) reveal settings through your characters and 2) don’t stop the action. Here are some ways to do that: 1. Reveal setting through motion. Consider what your character would notice, either immediately, or in passing. What do they interact with? Show the attachment (or lack of it) they have to a place. Have your character physically in the space. For instance, don’t just describe a suitcase in the middle of the hall, but have your character weave around it. Diana Gabaldon once noted that readers follow movement, so create it. Have your character lifting, turning, acting in some way with the setting. 2. Reveal setting through a character’s level of experience. A character’s beliefs and experiences will influence what they notice. Age, position, education, training, superstitions, fears, sex, etc., will color the